November 2nd, 2019

mourning

Question for y'all

Question for y'all. Chooli's surname is Hatathli-Ravenstone, not simply Ravenstone like the others. It was Nizoni's idea. (Nizoni was Nizoni Hatathli before marrying Morgana and becoming Nizoni Hatathli-Ravenstone.) But I want book three to be titled "Chooli Ravenstone and the (whatever)," because Chooli's actual surname is too long for the title. Is that too confusing?

(First book is "Dalia Ravenstone and the Vicious Circle," book two is "Vedya Ravenstone and the Forge of Ponos.")

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